Magical Girl Gunslinger – Mikasane

Pro:

Story is engaging. Main character is engaging.

Good writing and good writing mechanics. The story flows well, and reflects serious editing.

Got to the current end and started over.

Con:

A little too derivative. Straddles the line between the background being inspired by SCS and being a near-clone.

The main character has too many evil people and too much unfairness in her life. This cheapens her development.